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Ayame
Jul 25, 2006 15:37:21 GMT -5
Post by Ayame Sohma on Jul 25, 2006 15:37:21 GMT -5
*Character Name: Ayame
*Age: 18
*Zodiac: wolf
*Gender: fea
*Living Arrangments: She lives were ever she wants.
*Appearence: See siggy
*Zodiac Appearence: see siggy
*Personality: Sweet to others and likes to flirt.
*Likes: Boys, wolfs, friends and sports.
*Dislikes: Darkness.
Anything else you want to add about you're character(optionial): none
Pictures?(optional): see siggy
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Ayame
Jul 26, 2006 20:14:43 GMT -5
Post by Marcela Sohma on Jul 26, 2006 20:14:43 GMT -5
Hey its Ayame from Inuyasha!!! Did you know that there are 129 episodes of Inuyasha. Welcome to Original!
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Ayame
Jul 26, 2006 23:51:47 GMT -5
Post by Kairi Sohma on Jul 26, 2006 23:51:47 GMT -5
*stabs Inuyasha and Meggie for knowing that*
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Ayame
Jul 27, 2006 16:39:26 GMT -5
Post by Lily Sohma on Jul 27, 2006 16:39:26 GMT -5
-thanks katie for doing that.- moving on: i talked to rissa about it. (i copied it nd showed her w/ my comments, she basicly agrees with me. so here are the points i want to make:
1. "zodiac: Wolf" there is no wolf. please choose from one of the available animals: rooster, monkey, sheep, snake.
2. "living arrangments: she lives where ever she wants" she should have a set house or location.
3. "zodiac appearance: see siggy" there is no animal picture there. just the one of the girl
4. "Personality: Sweet to others and likes to flirt." this should be elaborated. if you look at the other applications it is a paragraph, not just one line.
5. "likes: boys, wolfs (1. dat's a SP. it's wolves.), friends and sports." what kinda sports?, what does she look for in a guy? elaborate a little more.
6. ((this is a personal pet peeve of mine)) you made your display name and pictures this character already, you don't know if you're accepted yet.
7. ((random sugestion)) the whole application should be at least a little over a page long (like if you copied it into word, it should be that long) yours is definitly not.
8. one more little thing: i don't get why she would DISLIKE darkness, because wolves are like night time animals. as well as day time, but they like the dark too. why else would their houses be caves?
ok. i said what i had to say. i told you what i think, if you could update that post, or make a new one with the corrections that'd be great.
Thanks -co-admin~Lily
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Ayame
Jul 28, 2006 17:47:25 GMT -5
Post by Hikaru Sohma on Jul 28, 2006 17:47:25 GMT -5
Yea I agree...I really dont mean to be mean I just want to know alittle more...she sounds realli cool so once you just fix a few things I can't wait to rp together
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Ayame
Jul 28, 2006 21:45:45 GMT -5
Post by Lily Sohma on Jul 28, 2006 21:45:45 GMT -5
lol.. i didn't realli mean to be a bitch either, it just kinda happens w/ me. lol. but yea, if you give more descriptions u'll be fine!
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Ayame
Jul 29, 2006 0:32:07 GMT -5
Post by Kairi Sohma on Jul 29, 2006 0:32:07 GMT -5
Oh, Jess does the dirty work. Just, please, don't feel bad and run Ayame! They really are being friendly... we told someone else they couldn't be the wolf too!
And, Jess, wolves are not nocturnal. They sleep during the night and don't live in caves. For example, the wolves in Alaska often sleep out in the open on the tundra. They will usually create a small hollow in the ground if it is soft enough and sleep together to share body heat.
And sorry about the whole Inuyasha thing ^^;; I just don't like the show... I think it's worse than a certain anime I like to label as my 'guilty pleasure' >.> which isn't such a great show either but completely addictive. So I understand!
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Ayame
Jul 29, 2006 8:06:59 GMT -5
Post by Lily Sohma on Jul 29, 2006 8:06:59 GMT -5
oh. my bad. i thought wolves liked the dark. mayb i'm thinkin of somethin else in that family.
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Ayame
Jul 30, 2006 21:21:57 GMT -5
Post by Kairi Sohma on Jul 30, 2006 21:21:57 GMT -5
...like cats? (No, I am not serious.)
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Ayame
Aug 11, 2006 6:44:17 GMT -5
Post by Lily Sohma on Aug 11, 2006 6:44:17 GMT -5
((no like i duno wat)) lol. i duno wat i was thinking. prolly like coyotes (sp?) or sumthin like that.
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Ayame
Aug 11, 2006 19:29:23 GMT -5
Post by Kairi Sohma on Aug 11, 2006 19:29:23 GMT -5
I don't think most dogs are nocturnal.
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Ayame
Sept 10, 2006 7:46:15 GMT -5
Post by Lily Sohma on Sept 10, 2006 7:46:15 GMT -5
shut up.. ((did we ever hear back from dis chicka?))
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Ayame
Sept 10, 2006 21:28:26 GMT -5
Post by Kairi Sohma on Sept 10, 2006 21:28:26 GMT -5
I don't think so... e-mail her.
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Ayame
Sept 15, 2006 14:45:28 GMT -5
Post by Lily Sohma on Sept 15, 2006 14:45:28 GMT -5
nah. her loss, not realli ours, if she can't even reply to her own Bio, then we can assume she won't be on the site at all that much.
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Ayame
Sept 16, 2006 0:24:43 GMT -5
Post by Kairi Sohma on Sept 16, 2006 0:24:43 GMT -5
Trueness. Jess is a good admin. I keep forgetting I'm an admin... darnit.
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